...Daliff VS. KUS... Bring the Pain<<

[Kill]

iight 1st off...i neva really spit rhymes/ but i seen yo shii be4 n now u can see minez/
actually i aint spittin my fingers doin the talkin/ if i catch u round the hood itll be ur last time walkin.....

cuz ima get u suckaa like damon wayans/ n my flowz insane/ straight off the top of the brain/ shii i can even spit while im gettin brainz.....

n when im getin brainz the bitch she neva spit/ i make her gargle my cum n swallow that shii/ but yo ur momz aint a bitch she nicee too me son/ yes i called u son cuz ur moms my hun n she pregnant wit a 2nd one...

soo lets here ur wak bars one more time/ but actually rap this time n dont cry n whine/ cuz all that complainin u call rappin aint soundin tight/ its all good if u wanna sit out this fight!!! :boxing: :lolabove:


iight get @ me dawgggg....

[Shawty4daG]

*shock* neva knew dat u rhyme lol but thats nice rite dere..

[Reppin]

ding ding ding

first round knock out been 40 min with no response

[D. Aliff]

u might help run this site, but ill demolish u in this section...
ur not even causing me indegestion, take u out while im polishing up my weapons...

ill abolish u in a second, please man, take ur weak rhymes to another site...
cuz u spit nothin nice, u should just try again another night u fucking dyke....

ur not gonna 'bust a pipe' and ur not gonna stop me from walking...
if u 'caught me in the hood', i'd be the one leaving, it'd be your body they're chalkin...

u prolly just talkin, but dont u ever say that i dont spit that hot shit...
or ima rip ur ficking spine out, stab u in the face with ur coccyx...

ur rhymes just flopped bitch, u couldnt see me with binoculars on...
i got the cop killer drawn, u come outside, squat, and get popped on ur lawn...

its not goin be long before yall wack dudes just stop tryin...
ur not 'fire', and ur not a damn thug that 'pops iron'...

im not tryin' to disrespect u, but u better listen kid...
open Photoshop, leave the rapping to the fellas in ur sig...

[Kill]

okkk daliff i see i got u pissed/ but lets take it ezz dawg/
<< passes the spliff/ puff on this son, this gon be ur last hit

also wha took so long for a response from u kid??/
had to check ur notes to fuk wit my shii??
n if my shii was that wak/ then lemme know why/
u had to write more than me by over 9 lines??

im takin u too school/u better study up college boy/
but u cant pass this test/ no way u fukin wit KUS
talkin bout u polishin weapons/ ima teach u a lesson
how u gonna talk/ wit ya jaws wired shut for fukin wit a boss??

:bandanagun: :bandanagun: :bandanagun: merked again!!

[GIT]

KUS is rippin u up daliff...damn...daliff, ur not a cop killer, u work wit the cops helpin to bust niggaz who sell beer to underage kids...THATS NOT GANGSTA! brrraaattt!!

[Kill]

KUS is rippin u up daliff...damn...daliff, ur not a cop killer, u work wit the cops helpin to bust niggaz who sell beer to underage kids...THATS NOT GANGSTA! brrraaattt!!
ohh hell no......daliff the bull???
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[SpitZ Pacino]

Y'all can't be serious... This is the wackest buncha bars I've ever read in my life... Seems like a buncha preschool kids rhymin' they asses off with their homeboys tellin' 'em that what they spittin' is fresh.. :lol:...

also wha took so long for a response from u kid??/
had to check ur notes to fuk wit my shii??
n if my shii was that wak/ then lemme know why/
u had to write more than me by over 9 lines??


Kill Your Self... Those were the only four bars where you actually went at dude out of around 24... The rest were filled with mama jokes... Gun talk... And a whole bunch of other nonsense... You really gotta up your skills, son... I'm tryinna come at this as nice as I can so you won't take it as I'm hatin' on you or have you get mad and start some net beef with me... When you diss somebody, the most important aspects you have to bring to the table are Punches/Metas/Sims/Personals... In your whole verse you had 2 personals... 0 Metas or Sims.... And 0 Punchlines... How you expect to win a battle without punchlines?... You got a lot of work to do, kiddo... Keep practicin'...

Daliff... You had one nice bar in the whole verse and that was your closer... The rest of the verse was filled with pointless multi's... Seemed like you were tryinna get ya dipset on while attempting to diss a dude... Threw horrorcore in there to what effect?... It was a buncha fillers...

Overall this is highly disappointing...

[Kill]

lmfaooo Spitz....i spit how i wanna, not wha they tell me too <<

n this was my 1st attempt @ freestylin some shii in maddddd long...

[SpitZ Pacino]

No doubt, son... I hear you... Just a lil' constructive critisizm for you...

Props on not PMSin'...

Keep at it.