daliff89 -vs- -DANK-

[D. Aliff]

whatever he drops, i match without feeding......

i won't drop tonight since i'm about to go to bed.......i'll drop after work tomorrow night.....

[-DANK-]

yea im the newbie going against a veteran so call me loopy
see my name they ask who might he be, but when i drop ill call you groupie
i dunno much about daliff, if his staff gets stiff in the presence of dick
or how good his girl grips and slobs on my knob as I rip the spliff
but i know of his irish roots
so ill take his gold buckled boots, and eat his lucky charms in one of my gucci suits
your profile says 20 and your name '89, either your brain dead or as old as a dime
making you illegal and beating you a crime
never gave a fuck so i'll beat you senseless with rhymes
make you bleak and viewers speechless like mimes
come on now, west virginia going at chitown!?
farmboys cant rap, just milk cows and sleep wearing mommies night gown
how do you find time to battle caring for cattle?
when your done grazing meadow
bring home the kettle
and hop of that saddle you got a score to settle

[Trap Star]

*votes for -Dank- regardless of daliff's verse* :heehee:

[A.K.A]

damn honestly the best verse so far against liff!!!

will the king be dethroned?

stay tune and find out!


"farmboys cant rap, just milk cows and sleep wearing mommies night gown
how do you find time to battle caring for cattle?"

^^^^^^inbreed quote of the year!

[D. Aliff]

dude wanted a 'rhyme fest' now he has to face the 'consequence'...
he's from Chicago, i thought he'd have some 'common sense'...

thought he'd know i'm raising the dead and rejuvenating tombs...
he's goin' need some 'food and liquor' to recuperate his wounds...

people say you did well, but i can bomb you back...
dude swears he's sick, but he's just a hypochondriac...

his punches fall short, aims for my chest but they hit me at my waist...
but as soon as dude starts spittin', i start 'pissin' on his face'...

i'm just a 'blue collar' guy from the middle of sticks...
leave 'em mentally sick while this 'brat' is just piddlin' with shit...

we can do this on the net, on wax, or have a physical brawl...
cause i'm a teacher in this school, you're just a 'kid in the hall'...

i've squeezed 'MCs' to 'juice' as soon as the pushing began...
the 'resurrection' of nasty, 'Jesus walks' with my rhyme book in his hand...

it's like i forge diamonds in Antarctica how i'm releasing these cold gems...
bury dude's career deep beneath the streets at the feet of the 'molemen'...

[GreeKNastY]

dang....close one IMO

[A.K.A]

ohh shit!


liff came out of the coal mines and crushed u to diamonds!

[D. Aliff]

5 day vote, not hating/dickriding, or voting for yourself.....

good luck sir.....

[Dislexsic]

Liffs verses are just amazing on how intricate they always are....

Feel like i'm readin some old school Em or Jay shiii or somethin lol


Liff wins

[Trap Star]

i was gonna vote for the other dude until " the 'resurrection' of nasty, 'Jesus walks' with my rhyme book in his hand..."

[-DANK-]

good shit.

i knew you would mention common sense as soon you you found out im from chicago, everyone does. in the industry and outside of it.
:smh: i wish west virgina had rappers i can rap about

[D. Aliff]

i also mentioned Rhymefest twice, Consequence, Kanye, the Molemen, Lupe, Da Brat, R. Kelly, Kidz in the Hall, MC Juice, and Common again.....

but yea....good luck if i haven't said it already....

[-DANK-]

yea. thanx, good luck 2u2

[Puto Ignacio]

people say you did well, but i can bomb you back...
dude swears he's sick, but he's just a


hypochondriac...




we can do this on the net, on wax, or have a physical brawl...


cause i'm a teacher in this school, you're just a


'kid in the hall'...


i've squeezed 'MCs' to 'juice' as soon as the pushing began...
the 'resurrection' of nasty, 'Jesus walks' with my rhyme


book in his hand...





the shit that gripped the win IMO liff came out on this one!!! was close but gotta go with liff!

Closest battle ive seen on CM honsetly

[carljohnson]

damn. this dude is good....the first real competiton for you....but

that Jesus Walks line >>

that sealed this shit.

[DaDirtiest]

liff all the way. nice intricate intelligent shit.

[Bizάrrő]

ill vote later.... its not that close even tho first dude came nice i need to read them again

[-DANK-]

this really is my 1st battle ever. i never battled anyone before. i never got into battles but i was fucked up so i figured id try it out. im surprised at the positive feedback cause i know i can do better.

[Wack Jesus]

dank....

[Outlaw Immortal]

hmmmmmmmmm

*will vote in 5 mintues*

[YTG_Bank$]

liff

*neva seen liff do it lyke that I geuzz that :LickMe: helped him outt more*

[Outlaw Immortal]

good battle but gotta go wit liff his shit seemed more thought out and well put togather

big ups to both of u

[JPSensei]

voted daliff
dank widlin

[Bizάrrő]

i enjoy hip hop and ive seen a lot of battles and a lot of battle cats that cant even rap regular they only know how to battle...... daliff knows how to battle and i guess dank doesnt

[-DANK-]

i enjoy hip hop and ive seen a lot of battles and a lot of battle cats that cant even rap regular they only know how to battle...... daliff knows how to battle and i guess dank doesnt

well this is my 1st battle ever i dont battle. but i thought when you battle your supposed to diss the other person not talk about rappers and their albums. daliff didnt mention my name once. daliff just wrote down a buncha rappers names and their albums and bragged on himslef being good and that was it. anybody coulda did what daliff did. his rap was not specific to anybody. he could have been talking to the thousands of people living at chitown. if you guys wanted to see a 16 vs 16 i woulda merked his ass but i just thought your supposed to diss not write a random 16. i guess you guys aint looking for disses. :smh:

[D. Aliff]

then murk my ass.....


you can't, you suck.....


where was it that your verse was specific to me??? the part where you said i was a vet and you were loopy?? the part where you said i get stiff at the site of dick?? the part where you called me Irish??


your shit could of been aimed at anyone else as well, but it was aimed at me..........your name is 'dank', there's really no play on that name that i can think of that's not corny as fuck, and the only other info i have is you're from Chicago...........i could of went the whole 'Windy City/blow you away' route, but i decided that doing what i did would not only be specific to you (since you're obviously FROM Chicago), but that it would also be a HELL OF A LOT more creative than anything you've ever touched...........


get mad that you got beat, we can take it to any other board, the result will be the same.........we can have a rematch, the result will be the same........we can take the rematch to any other board, the result will be the same......

fact is, you can't fuck with me and you're angry about it.....

go outside.

[-DANK-]

then murk my ass.....


you can't, you suck.....


where was it that your verse was specific to me??? the part where you said i was a vet and you were loopy?? the part where you said i get stiff at the site of dick?? the part where you called me Irish??


your shit could of been aimed at anyone else as well, but it was aimed at me..........your name is 'dank', there's really no play on that name that i can think of that's not corny as fuck, and the only other info i have is you're from Chicago...........i could of went the whole 'Windy City/blow you away' route, but i decided that doing what i did would not only be specific to you (since you're obviously FROM Chicago), but that it would also be a HELL OF A LOT more creative than anything you've ever touched...........


get mad that you got beat, we can take it to any other board, the result will be the same.........we can have a rematch, the result will be the same........we can take the rematch to any other board, the result will be the same......

fact is, you can't fuck with me and you're angry about it.....

go outside.


why would i be angry? your the one thats angry blowing your top off. you dont even know what bars are how are you good? and i mention your name and rhymed with it. what kinda name is daliff anyways? and i went at you saying you 20 but your name stated your born in 89 and your irish roots and your west virginia farming activities. you wherent specific to anybody. you got like 5 votes just by the rhyme about resurrection and Jesus walks and you where talking about yourself. your best line had nothing to do with me.

[D. Aliff]

and you didn't have a best line, they all sucked ass.....

i'm not blowing anything, you're talking like you beat me because you have more attempted personals......personals ARE the most important part of a battle, but at the same time, good semi-personal lines > wack more-personal lines......

you can have all the personals you want, you're still not nicer than me......you also had way more ammo than me......

if you think you're nice and you want a rematch then set it up and i'll feed off your verse like hell, if not, stop bitching......you lost, deal with it.......

[-DANK-]

and you didn't have a best line, they all sucked ass.....



i'm not blowing anything, you're talking like you beat me because you have more attempted personals......personals ARE the most important part of a battle, but at the same time, good semi-personal lines > wack more-personal lines......

you can have all the personals you want, you're still not nicer than me......you also had way more ammo than me......

if you think you're nice and you want a rematch then set it up and i'll feed off your verse like hell, if not, stop bitching......you lost, deal with it.......


:rofl2:

even though i got nothing but compliments and props and this being my 1st battle.

you never got personal. if these battles where just up or recorded not knowing anything about it. people would know im dissing you and nobody would know who the fuck your dissing except it must be somebody from chicago. but you where not even dissing me. you kept saying thet your better. there was no direct diss to anybody. it took me awhile to figure out how to say your name. how am i bitching dude came in upset at me cause he caught feelings on a comment i made elsewhere so i tolld it like it is. everything i said is the truth. you made no direct diss. if you put that track out nobody would get hurt even if their from chicago. you said nothing hurtful at all. i dont care if i lost. if it doesnt involve money i aint concerned if i win or lose.. like i said i never got into battles but i was fucked up bored so decided to try and battle. ill battle you again but im sure people caught feelings and will vote for you no matter what.

[D. Aliff]

and for the second time, just because it's personal doesn't mean it's good.....

you can say none of my shit was a 'direct diss' if you want, but are you from Chicago??? yes. did i have anything to go off of besides your location??? no. did you make the callout thread?? yes. so you must of wanted a lyrical contest, or a 'rhyme fest' as it were, correct?? hence the wordplay in the first line........the rest of the shit builds off of the fact your'e from Chicago, which, again, is the only info i have on you besides your name......

there's one bar in my shit that didn't have anything to do with you, that was the third one..........every other line used wordplay, something that you're apparently not familiar with judging by your verse, to play off of the fact you're from Chicago......

none of my rhymes attacked you directly and all of them just talked about how nice i am huh?? the first bar calls you stupid, the second says i'll destroy you, the third says you're wack, the fourth says you're wack, the fifth says you're a child, the sixth says you're not on my level, the eighth says i'll bury you.......the seventh bar is the only one that talks about how nice i am and doesn't directly diss you, but it shits on your whole verse......

yes, a battle is supposed to be chock full of personals, i totally agree with you, and if i was reading a battle where the two dudes were evenly matched in the punchline/complexity/enjoyment catagories, i would DEFINITELY vote for the guy with more personals.......

but our verses were no where NEAR evenly matched in the complexity category.......i personally think i had more creative punches than you, since your nicest one was 'making you illegal and beating you a crime/ never gave a fuck so i'll beat you senseless with rhymes' and even that wasn't very good IMO, but that part of it IS subjective, along with the enjoyment category (which takes lead over all the other categories for most people, cause if you don't enjoy it, how can it be good??).......

but out of all the categories used to judge text battles that don't involve some sort of opinion (i.e. metaphors, punchlines, personals, wordplay, complexity, multis), i'd say you got one up on me since you DID have more personals than i did.......but i'd also say that i had more metaphors, more punchlines, more wordplay, more complexity, and more multis.......

and you can say people 'caught feelings' all you want, that's why i said to take it anywhere you want and the result would be the same.......if we battled again, the result would be the same.......if we put a random 16 from me against a random 16 from you, the result would be the same.......

for the second time, you can't fuck with me.......you lost the battle, you got pissed/angered/mad when Buz said you didn't know how to battle and decided to tell him that my verse sucked and that you'd 'merk' me if we put 16 -vs- 16......

we just put 16 -vs- 16 and you got raped.......no need to talk like you're nicer than someone you clearly aren't nicer than, just take the L and move on......it's just the internet.......

[-DANK-]

dude wanted a 'rhyme fest' now he has to face the 'consequence'...
he's from Chicago, i thought he'd have some 'common sense'...

thought he'd know i'm raising the dead and rejuvenating tombs...
he's goin' need some 'food and liquor' to recuperate his wounds...

people say you did well, but i can bomb you back...
dude swears he's sick, but he's just a hypochondriac...

his punches fall short, aims for my chest but they hit me at my waist...
but as soon as dude starts spittin', i start 'pissin' on his face'...

i'm just a 'blue collar' guy from the middle of sticks...
leave 'em mentally sick while this 'brat' is just piddlin' with shit...

we can do this on the net, on wax, or have a physical brawl...
cause i'm a teacher in this school, you're just a 'kid in the hall'...

i've squeezed 'MCs' to 'juice' as soon as the pushing began...
the 'resurrection' of nasty, 'Jesus walks' with my rhyme book in his hand...

^you got like 5 votes just because of this line and it had nothing to do with me.

it's like i forge diamonds in Antarctica how i'm releasing these cold gems...
bury dude's career deep beneath the streets at the feet of the 'molemen'...


you had no personal diss in there at all. who said he wanted a rhyme fest? i never said i wanted a rhyme fest. you think im the only person living in chicago? nobody would know who your talking to. you didnt diss me at all. you just kept talking about yourself the whole time. saying how great you think you are and how much better you think you are than me. thats like basic shit everybody can hype themself up. i mentioned your name a few times and rhymed with it. a diss your supposed to get personal otherwise its just a random 16. you didnt diss me and you didnt diss chicago you didnt diss anybody you just hyped yourself up. ofcourse your gonna like yours more. like i said this was a battle and you didnt battle you hyped yourself up and used chicago rappers to do so. like i said i wasnt happy with mine and i could have done better but atleast i dissed you and battled you, you didnt. and i dont care if you won or not im only competitive when money is involved. how did i get raped when people where saying this battle was close and the closest one and they picked you because of that line you where talking about yourself. its so easy to write a random 16 like you did i came to battle you came to hype yourself up. also your a mod here and been here awhile i just came in so people know you and some people will pick you cause they like you. its an internet battle so alot of people dont take seriously. i dont think anybody does except you.

[[]D[][]V[][]D]

:behindwalla:

[D. Aliff]

i'm the only one taking this seriously and you're saying i won because i got dickridden??

again, if you want a remath, set it up......we can make it any kind of battle you want, we can have it anywhere you want.......it can be a normal battle with one round, a normal battle with three rounds, a topical battle, a punchline battle with one round, a punchline battle with three rounds.........

i'm not taking the battle seriously, i could care less if i lose or if i win, what i take seriously is a wack fuck like yourself saying 'if it was 16-vs- 16 i would of merked him' when we're posting in a thread where a 16 from you was put against a 16 from me and you got shit on........

if i have no information on you for a battle, what else am i supposed to talk about besides you being wack??? should i say how i'm going to kill you??? should i say i'm going to fuck your girl??? all of that is played, none of my concepts were played.......

and i still feel like you have no clue about what wordplay is.......'rhyme' is a synonym for 'rap', 'fest' is a synonym for 'competition'........that means 'rhyme fest' is a synonym for 'rap competition'..........you posted a call out thread asking for a battle, or a 'rap competition', you're from Chicago, Chicago has a rapper named 'Rhymefest'.........that's wordplay sir.......

agains, i could of rhymed with your name all i wanted, but it would of been a lot less creative tahan what i did do.......and as far as me not dissing anyone, personally, i'd take someone calling me stupid, then a pussy, then wack, then wack again, then a child, then wack again, then a pussy again, pretty personal, especially if they were using rappers from my birth place to tell me that i was wack.......

so, in short, if you're still upset with the fact you got pooped on, set up another battle, if you're not going to do that, this will be my last post on the subject......

[carljohnson]

DANK. you can't argue about him not using personals if you didn't either. period. now shut up.

[D. Aliff]

^^nah he had personals, they were just wack....

'i know about his Irish roots/ so ill take his gold buckled boots, and eat his lucky charms in one of my gucci suits' <--- that shit IS a personal, i AM Irish, i DO like Lucky Charms, but the line is wack as fuck.....

there's no question he had more personals than me, but there's also no question i had more wordplay/multiple syllable rhymes/complexity/metaphors than him.........

he won the personal category because he had MORE personals, but i had MORE everything else.......personals matter in a battle, but they're not all that matters.......

[Jerz]

both were good but i'm going with liff cause other dude took a while to really get into it

[-DANK-]

i'm the only one taking this seriously and you're saying i won because i got dickridden??

again, if you want a remath, set it up......we can make it any kind of battle you want, we can have it anywhere you want.......it can be a normal battle with one round, a normal battle with three rounds, a topical battle, a punchline battle with one round, a punchline battle with three rounds.........

i'm not taking the battle seriously, i could care less if i lose or if i win, what i take seriously is a wack fuck like yourself saying 'if it was 16-vs- 16 i would of merked him' when we're posting in a thread where a 16 from you was put against a 16 from me and you got shit on........

if i have no information on you for a battle, what else am i supposed to talk about besides you being wack??? should i say how i'm going to kill you??? should i say i'm going to fuck your girl??? all of that is played, none of my concepts were played.......

and i still feel like you have no clue about what wordplay is.......'rhyme' is a synonym for 'rap', 'fest' is a synonym for 'competition'........that means 'rhyme fest' is a synonym for 'rap competition'..........you posted a call out thread asking for a battle, or a 'rap competition', you're from Chicago, Chicago has a rapper named 'Rhymefest'.........that's wordplay sir.......

agains, i could of rhymed with your name all i wanted, but it would of been a lot less creative tahan what i did do.......and as far as me not dissing anyone, personally, i'd take someone calling me stupid, then a pussy, then wack, then wack again, then a child, then wack again, then a pussy again, pretty personal, especially if they were using rappers from my birth place to tell me that i was wack.......

so, in short, if you're still upset with the fact you got pooped on, set up another battle, if you're not going to do that, this will be my last post on the subject......


fuck man make that shit short im not bout to read a novel. i dissed, you didnt. you put out a random ass 16. i could have done the same. how did i get shit on when everyone said it was the closest and many said you just one cause of those 2 bars hyping yourself up? :smh: and lets not forget you been in many battles got your practice this is my 1st and got everyone talking. not only you dont know what bars in hip hop are you also dont know what fest means. look it up and get educated. fest is a gathering NOT a competition. and once again you didnt diss me at all in your 16 so i dont see how it was a battle. i dissed you and you where just hyping yourself up.

[-DANK-]

DANK. you can't argue about him not using personals if you didn't either. period. now shut up.

did you read my 16 blindfolded or with your eyes closed? mine was full of personals daliff had zero. do you even know anything about how to rap? if not stick to listening to it not talking about it. :smh:

[-DANK-]

both were good but i'm going with liff cause other dude took a while to really get into it

?????

[Jerz]

?????


you don't understand what i mean by take a while to get into it? your lines didn't flow until 1/2 thru your shit....

[-DANK-]

you don't understand what i mean by take a while to get into it? your lines didn't flow until 1/2 thru your shit....

i understand what you meant but it flowed good from beginning to end.